Throughout the process of making elevator pitches, I would like to think that they have gotten better with each attempt. I really tried to incorporate the feedback that was provided by my classmates, and I really appreciated everyone being so helpful. On my last elevator pitch, there weren't too many corrections from my peers. One person suggested that I make it clear that I market to bicycles as well, and I thought that was an important point.
In this final elevator pitch, I did not change too much from what I did in my last one. I mention bicycles and motorcycles in the beginning as well so people do not think that I only market to scooters. Hopefully, I have finally created a successful elevator pitch, and I really do appreciate everyone's helpful comments and corrections.
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